That last panel. With Holly and the pencil. Brilliance in its purest form. I'm currently obsessing over the multi-coloured eyes ^-^ I like Artemis in the big panel in the lower left. Very nice facial structure.
MAN I LOVE THIS! And hehe a funny thing, I've reading the first chapther, and... because I'm kinda conected to our little Artemis I got an obession about the numbers 4 and 5 to... My almost made my friends go crazy... I still to it... like It's 5 YEARS scince I started in the first AF book, I avoid to do things 4 times... man, it's killing me, I really understand you Artemis...
I don't think we could make the whole book... O_O;;; Well, maybe Iesnoth could do it, because she's a little devil genius (>D), but I have too much work scheduled for vacation... xD' Aww, thank you for your comment and kind words! <D ^////^
PS. Did I tell you already that your icon is an epic win?? XDDD